Your Opinion Needed!...

Hi all,

Finally, my site is up and running! Please could i ask you to have a look at it? I would love your comments, opinions - in fact any advice that will help me to make this site look better. I would also like to know, if you were in the market for an opportunity such as this one, if you would go for it? In otherwords, does this site "speak to you?" Is all the relevant info needed there? Is it concise? Does it flow? What is right with the site? What is wrong with the site?

All comments most welcome!

Kind regards
Michele De Bruin
http://www.k9mums.com
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Re : Your Opinion Needed!

Hi Michele

Nice and clear, bright site.

However the message is not clear to me. Is the purpose of the site:

1) you want to look after my dog

2) you want me to buy into a franchise of your business that lets me get something in return

if 1) it's not too clear. If 2) then what are the benefits and what do I get?

It may be these are answered but on a quick look at the homepage I wasn't really sure what it was for and what it wanted me to do.

Hope this helps

Thomas

Re : Your Opinion Needed!

Hi Thomas, i have changed the layout of my website according to your comments. Pls have a look when you get a moment - is it clearer now?

Thanks for your input by the way, it is much appreciated.

Kind regards
Michele De Bruin
www.k9mums.com
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Re : Your Opinion Needed!

Hi Michele

I really liked the logo and general cheeriness of the site.

I wonder if the homepage is still a bit wordy, it takes a while to read and digest - perhaps if the homepage could be broken down to the key points with all the meaty details on subpages it might be a little more effective for the quick browser to work out what's what?

Just my thoughts

Lianne

Re : Your Opinion Needed!

I think the homepage is far too wordy.

From the sub-headings that page could naturally be split into three or four separate pages, each of them focusing on an individual area.

Hope this helps,

Tim

Re : Your Opinion Needed!

Seems pretty clear to me, of course ask five people and you'll get five different opinions!

Chris

Re : Your Opinion Needed!

Lol well said Chris - yep, everyone likes to have an opinion!

Tim

Re : Your Opinion Needed!

I like it, as you go along you will need to refine it of course, it will never be perfect. But it sure looks great to start with. Hope it works out for ya! Later

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Re : Your Opinion Needed!

I like the header picture - nice and cheery.

Also good to see text that is easy to read, so many sites have tiny text these days.

Also the message it gives seems nice and clear to me

Sasha

Re : Your Opinion Needed!

Yep also liked the header / logo, good looking site
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