My three webs...

I had three webs:
http://www.zjspo.com
http://www.abspo.com
http://www.gfspo.com
Please view them and give us the opinion or feedback, thanks! The webs are for golf.

Re : My three webs

How many webs do you have?

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I have visited the first of the three and have to say that it is very green. I would strongly consider change the grassy background to something less striking and more subtle.

The text also needs to be made more invited so that your message is quickly and easily understood the moment the visitor arrives at the page.

I trust that you will take these comments in the spirit in which they are given. I will try to review the others soon.

Good luck with the sites,

Vicky
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Thank you Vicky. Your suggestion is very important to me and we are rather appreciated you gave us your suggestion.

1) It is green, but i thought is was soft and nice.

2) Could you give me example how to make the text more invited? Thanks and nice weekend!

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Vicky , could you also be kind to tell me my three webs speed? Your location country? thanks!

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Hi Jordan,

The home page of each site loads quite slowly. I am on a leased line and the speeds should be better than they are.

Having had a quick glance at all three sites, my main question is why do you have three almost identical sites?

Your are going to get penalised for this with most major search engines and in addition the business logic of having to advertise, maintain and support three sites instead of one is not obvious.

Come back to me on the above points. I am curious.

Vicky.

P.S I am in the UK, rainy London
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Thank you for your reply, my friend, Vicky! Many thanks!
I am sorry to learn my web speed is slow.

Three almost identical sites is for the reason that i deeply believed the more webs you had, the more chance you had that getting inquires from your customers.

Thank you Vicky, i am in china. And by the way, do you play golf? Thanks!

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Hi Jordan,

I understand your logic regarding multiple sites. The problem is that a single well crafted site has a higher chance of performing well in search engines.

Multiple sites (the two copies) will be ignored at best and might bring down all three in terms of rankings at worst.

It may well be that one well ranked site could bring in more traffic overall than three or more poorly ranked ones.

I had two company formation sites and discovered that the growth of one was restricting the developement of the other.

Depending on how and where you plan to advertise (i.e not through search engines natural listings) your plan may well work and you might generate more collective traffic that way.

I hope you do.

Vicky
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Thank you Vicky!! Thank you for all your effort. Wish you nice weekend. And if possible, please add my msn:absportsjordan@hotmail.com . Thanks!

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The content is not great imho, neither is the on-site optimisation, however part from that tey look very nice
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Thank you, Peteark ! Do you have any more suggestions about how to attract more people to visit them? thanks!

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You have a good site but its much time to load

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Thank you Mace_joyce. Yes, i thought it was a question and we will try to solve this. Thanks!

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Yes one of the sites just timed out for me so perhaps there is a lot of graphics on there or just on a slow server... either way might be worth trying to speed up access a bit (unless I just got unlucky and it's normally quicker... will try again later)

Chris

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Hi,
A little too grassy for me. A simpler less distracting background may be better.

Gary
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I like the green background, but one more, to make some strong point to atrict the customers is better.
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